* Essay about dream job*

          What would you like to be? It is a common question which we have been asked since childhood. Everyone has a certain future goal .Selecting a career is the most important decision in a person's life.

             My dream is to be an interior designer. Since I was child, I interested in creating things. The interior designer concerned with every types of building such as offices, homes, restaurants, hotels and hospitals. Besides to the concerns with lighting, furniture, textures and colors. All of these are suitable with my concerns.

              I hope to be an interior decorator because I like to create new things and make it becomes more beautiful .I love the idea of working with colors and textures. Help the others is another reason because decorator help people to create a pleasant places. Also dealing with others and meeting new people. Moreover training to become an interior decorator is available in different places all over the country. Finally the interior decorators work freely and in their own offices. They can travels to many locations.

              To be an interior decorator, you should follow some steps. Firstly, you should educate yourself by knowing about how you can arrange furniture and use of colors in particular spaces. Secondly, practice at your home by changing the color of your room or make any changes. Thirdly; you can train your eyes. When you enter any room you should know what looks good and what is need to improve.

              All in all the most valuable thing of life is a future job. That’s because the person's life depends on his career. So every one should choose the career which fits his qualities and work hard to achieve it.

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My dream job.

(Interior decorator)

1.What is my dream job?

2.What attracts me for this job?

3.What are the reasons for choosing this job?

4.What are the benefits i will have through this job?

5.How can I prepare myself for this career?

Second draft

            (Essay on Educational System)

            Education is very important for individuals. It is important for development of human and societies. Egypt has one of the largest education systems in the world. The Egyptian educational system is highly valued .It is divided into three stages, basic, primary stage, secondary stage and post secondary stage. Each stage has its features but Egypt also faces a lot of problems.

               First of all, there is the primary school where children receive the first stage of basic education. It depends on the student's ability. Then ,there is secondary school which is the final stage for compulsory education. Both of them are free and compulsory. The purpose of secondary education can be to give students general knowledge , to prepare them for vocational education or higher education.Also to train students directly to profession.finally university stage such as Cairo university,Ain shams university,Alexandria university and Suez canal university.

            There are two types of education as public education and private education.public education is under the government administration.It provides the governmental national curriculum.

The private education is similar to the governmental education but in it ,they pay attention on the students needs and the facilities which face them.They are considered to be better than public education but its fees are much higher.Moreover the public education is overcrowded with students unlike private education which has much smaller number of students.

             Unfortunately,there are a lot of problems which have effects on the educational system. The teachers don’t give students practical skills .They leave students without preparation for collage and then work places. Besides the lack of good libraries and the overcrowdedness of schools. Moreover facilities like science labs or computers are often closed.Also the system itself interested in memorizing and books rather than critical thinking.There are also proplems which related with the selection of teacher ,construction of building and the management of schools.

            Improving the educational system is the most important factor that needs immediate attention. To develop the education system, we need to train the teachers and make teaching an attractive profession. Also the government should improve the quality of learning and teaching. we need to make schools accessible to families everywhere. Make schooling attractive for children to like it. Then government should increase private income for the family, which provides a better life quality. Moreover government should recognize the weakness of educational system and reform it.    

         Education is necessary for the protection of individuals and socitities.It has been considered as a human right.So  government should have attention for problems of educational system and try to solve it.

first draft

            (Essay on Educational System)

            Education is very important for individuals. It is important for development of human and societies. Egypt has one of the largest education systems in the world. The Egyptian educational system is highly valued .It is divided into three stages, basic, primary stage, secondary stage and post secondary stage. Each stage has its features but Egypt also face a lot of problems.

               First of all, there is the primary school where children receive the first stage of basic education. It depends on the student's ability. Then ,there is secondary school which is the final stage for compulsory education. Both of them are free and compulsory. The purpose of secondary education can be to give students general knowledge , to prepare them for vocational education or higher education.Also to train students directly to profession.finally university stage such as Cairo university,Ain shams university,Alexandria university and Suez canal university.

            There are two types of education as public education and private education.public education is under the government administration.It provides the governmental national curriculum.

The private education is similar to the governmental education but in it ,they pay attention on the students needs and the facilities which face them.They are considered to be better than public education but its fees are much higher.Moreover the public education is overcrowded with students unlike private education which has much smaller number of students.

             Unfortunately,there are a lot of problems which have effects on the educational system. The teachers don’t give students practical skills .They leave students without preparation for collage and then work places. Besides the lack of good libraries and the overcrowdedness of schools. Moreover facilities like science labs or computers are often closed.Also the system itself interested in memorizing and books rather than critical thinking.There are also proplems which related with the selection of teacher ,construction of building and the management of schools.

            Improving the educational system is the most important factor that needs immediate attention. To develop the education system, we need to train the teachers and make teaching an attractive profession. Also the government should improve the quality of learning and teaching. we need to make schools accessible to families everywhere. Make schooling attractive for children to like it. Then government should increase private income for the family, which provides a better life quality. Moreover government should recognize the weakness of educational system and reform it.    

         Education is necessary for the protection of individuals and socitities.It has been considered as a human right.So  government should have attention for problems of educational system and try to solve it.

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Our Educational System

1-what is the importance of education?

2-what are the stages of education system in Egypt?

a.primary or basic stage.

b.secondary stage.

c.university stage 

-what are the types of education in Egypt? 3

a.public education.

b.private education.

4-what are the problems and facilities which face the education system in Egypt?

5-How can we solve the problems of educational system?

Final Draft

                               Essay on television

             Television is considered one of the most popular inventions of the twentieth century. Television becomes a changeable tool of personal life. It is a widely used and highly accepted device that is found in most homes today. Now we can't imagine our life without television. There is a great variety of opinions about television: some say that it’s very useful, and the others say that it’s harmful.

                      On the one hand there are various and valuable programs on television .Through it, we are provided with different kinds of information. There is news which informs us with every thing that happens around all over the world. Then it can be a means of adversiting, it provides us with information about new products. Besides information about weather broadcast. Also we can see the important events life especially sports events such as football matches. Moreover there are the educational programs; through it people absorb knowledge like science, history and health care.

                         On the other hand, Television is also kind of relaxation. For instances, people can see films or movies that can entertain them in their leisure time. Moreover watching TV is kind of activity for people who can't move much from their home.If you feel boring ,you can switch on TV and watch whatever you want like as comedy ,drama or action. TV programs can provide entertainment for individuals and groups.

                         Apart from its advantages, however, television  brings lots of disadvantages to viewers too. For me one of these disadvantages is that the television viewers become passive in their action. The TV separates us from the real world because it isn’t giving them opportunity to communicate with each other or the outer world.Also it wastes the time because people spend all their time watching TV.As result of that, they neglect their jobs.Besides to it reduces the connection among the members of family

                         Nowadays television becomes a means of harm especially for children. Many children become inactive in their educational life. That is because they spend most of their time watching TV and neglect their lessons and their homework. Also it has mental and physical effects on children. They face problems with their bodies such as overweight and effects on the eye- sight. Moreover it, there are a lot of programs or movies which aren’t suitable for children. Through it, children learn violence and may try it. So I'm against TV.

             In conclusion television is a great invention. But as we know every invention has its advantages and its disadvantages. So we should make use of it and make restriction on watching it.

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                               Essay on television

             Television is considered one of the most popular inventions of the twentieth century. Television becomes a changeable tool of person life. It is a widely used and highly accepted device that is found in most homes today. Now we can't imagine our life without television. There is a great variety of opinions about television: some say that it’s very useful, and the others that it’s harmful.

                      On one hand there are various and valuable programs on television .Through it, we can inform with different kinds of information. There is news which informs us with every thing happen around all over the world. Then it can be a mean of adversiting, it provided us with information about new products. Besides information about weather broadcast. Also we can sea the important events life especially sports events such as football matches. Moreover there are the educational programs; through it people absorb knowledge like science, history and health care.

                         On the other hand, Television is also kind of relaxation. For instances, people can sea films or movies that can entertain them in their leisure time. Moreover watching TV is kind of activity for people who can't moving much from their home. If you are bored, you can switch on TV and sea whatever you want like comedy, drama or action. Television programming can provide entertainment for individuals and groups.

                         Apart from its advantages, however, television also brings lots of disadvantages to viewers too. For me one of these disadvantages is that the television viewers become passive in their action. The TV separates us from the real world because it isn’t giving them opportunity to communicate with each other or the outer world.Also it wastes the time because people spend all their time watching TV.As result of that, they neglect their jobs.Besides to it reduces the connection among the members of family

                         Nowadays television becomes a means of harmful especially for children. Many children become inactive in their educational life. That is because they spend most of their time watching TV and neglect their lessons and their homework. Also it has mental and physical effects on children. They face problems with their bodies such as overweight and effects on the eye- sight. Moreover it, there are a lot of programs or movies which aren’t suitable for children. Through it, children learn violence and may be try it. So I against TV.

             In conclusion television is a great invention. But as we know every invention has its advantages and its disadvantages. So we should make use of it and make restriction on watching it.

first draft(essay on television)

                               Essay on television

             Television is considered one of the most popular inventions of the twentieth century. Television becomes a changeable tool of person life. It is a widely used and highly accepted device that is found in most homes today. Now we can't imagine our life without television. There is a great variety of opinions about television: some say that it’s very useful, and the others that it’s harmful.

                      On one hand there are various and valuable programs on television .Through it, we can inform with different kinds of information. There is news which informs us with every thing happen around all over the world. Then it can be a mean of adversiting, it provided us with information about new products. Besides information about weather broadcast. Also we can sea the important events life especially sports events such as football matches. Moreover there are the educational programs; through it people absorb knowledge like science, history and health care.

                         On the other hand, Television is also kind of relaxation. For instances, people can sea films or movies that can entertain them in their leisure time. Moreover watching TV is kind of activity for people who can't moving much from their home. If you are bored, you can switch on TV and sea whatever you want like comedy, drama or action. Television programming can provide entertainment for individuals and groups.

                         Apart from its advantages, however, television also brings lots of disadvantages to viewers too. For me one of these disadvantages is that the television viewers become passive in their action. The TV separates us from the real world because it isn’t giving them opportunity to communicate with each other or the outer world.Also it wastes the time because people spend all their time watching TV.As result of that, they neglect their jobs.Besides to it reduces the connection among the members of family

                         Nowadays television becomes a means of harmful especially for children. Many children become inactive in their educational life. That is because they spend most of their time watching TV and neglect their lessons and their homework. Also it has mental and physical effects on children. They face problems with their bodies such as overweight and effects on the eye- sight. Moreover it, there are a lot of programs or movies which aren’t suitable for children. Through it, children learn violence and may be try it. So I against TV.

             In conclusion television is a great invention. But as we know every invention has its advantages and its disadvantages. So we should make use of it and make restriction on watching it.

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                                       Television

Introduction

A. general idea about television.    

b.imagine our life without television.

C.the importance of television.

   Body

1-the variety of TV programs

a.the different types of TV programs.              

     b.the reasons for the importance of TV programs.        

2- some people with the use of TV.

        a.the reasons for their good attitude about TV(the advantages of TV)           

b.the positive effects of TV.        

3- Other people against the use of TV.

     a. the reasons for their bad attitude about TV(disadvantages of TV).       

     b.the harmful influence of TV which become a means of violence.               

conclusion

         a.how can we make use of TV.

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Water pollution

                     Undoubtedly water is the most precious resource that exists on our planet. It covers about 75% of the earth’s surface and without it our planet will not grow and flourish. Although most of people know this fact, they damaged their planet by polluting water resources.

               Water pollution is any change in the physical, chemical and biological properties of water that has a harmful effect on living things.

There are two types of water pollution. Firstly, surface water these are the natural water resources of the Earth. These are found on the exterior of the Earth's crust, oceans, rivers and lakes.Secondly, groundwater means earth's water which found in soil or under rock structures called aquifers. In case this water becomes polluted, it is called groundwater pollution.

               

                   There are many causes for this problem. One of these main causes is ship waste. Ships used to take much garbage with them on their ships and dump them.
The other main cause of water pollution is industrial waste. Many companies pour chemicals into the waterways. Other cause is water waste which comes from houses. Sewage, sludge, garbage, and even toxic pollutants are all dumped into the water.

Instead of water being a source of living, it becomes receptacles (container) for every kind of pollution.

                   The effects of water pollution are varied and depend on what chemicals are dumped and in what locations. The main problem caused by water pollution is the effect   on the marine life. Dead fish, birds, dolphins, and many other animals are often killed .other effects is  damage of  the food chain .That is because water is loaded with toxic  and harmful chemicals which in some cases killing all members of a species in an affected area.  Also Pollutants in the water affect the chemistry of the water. Humans are affected by this process as well.  People can get Infectious diseases such as typhoid and cholera.

      

                      We need to start cleaning up the water or we will be in big trouble. The government needs to get active and so does the public. Many laws have been created to restrict industries from dumping materials into the water. Many projects should be carried out in an effort to clean up the water.  Industries should reduce the amount of chemicals they dump into water. The environmental police have taken charge of enforcing water pollution solutions. Also we should encourage Organic foods mean that there were no harmful contaminants used in the growing of the food. 

                Water is a necessity of life and it needs to be conserved and protected. From all of the above pollutants, our water supply is in danger. If we value life as we know it, we need to change our way of life and look at water in a different way. Water is a part of nature and nature concludes everything. Not only the humans but all living organisms belong to and rely on nature. Let us encourage people to save water as well as to try keeping it clean and pure.

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                                                      water pollution

                     Undoubtedly water is the most precious resource that exists on our planet. It covers about 75% of the earth’s surface and without it our planet will not grow and flourish. Although most of people know this fact, they damaged their planet by polluting water  resources.

            

                Water pollution is any change in the physical, chemical and biological properties of water that has a harmful effect on living things.

There are two types of water pollution. Firstly, surface water these are the natural water resources of the Earth. These are found on the exterior of the Earth's crust, oceans, rivers and lakes. Secondly, groundwater means earth's water which found in soil or under rock structures called aquifers. In case this water becomes polluted, it is called   groundwater pollution

               

                   There are many causes for this problem. One of these main causes is ship waste. Ships used to take much garbage with them on their ships and dump them. 
The other main cause of water pollution is industrial waste. Many companies pour chemicals into the waterways. Other cause is water waste which comes from houses. Sewage, sludge, garbage, and even toxic pollutants are all dumped into the water.

Instead of water being a source of living, it becomes receptacles(container)for every kind of pollution.

                   The effects of water pollution are varied and depend on what chemicals are dumped and in what locations. The main problem caused by water pollution is the effect   on the marine life. Dead fish, birds, dolphins, and many other animals are often killed .other effects is  damage of  the food chain .That is because water is loaded with toxic  and harmful chemicals which in some cases killing all members of a species in an affected area.  Also Pollutants in the water affect the chemistry of the water. Humans are affected by this process as well.  People can get Infectious diseases such as typhoid and cholera.

      

                      We need to start cleaning up the water or we will be in big trouble. The government needs to get active and so does the public. Many laws have been created to restrict industries from dumping materials into the water. Many projects should be carried out in an effort to clean up the water.  Industries should reduce the amount of chemicals they dump into water. The environmental police have taken charge of enforcing water pollution solutions. Also we should encourage Organic foods mean that there were no harmful contaminants used in the growing of the food. 

                Water is a necessity of life and it needs to be conserved and protected. From all of the above pollutants, our water supply is in danger. If we value life as we know it, we need to change our way of life and look at water in a different way. Water is a part of nature and nature concludes everything. Not only the humans but all living organisms belong to and rely on nature. Let us encourage people to save water as well as to try keeping it clean and pure.

                  Essay on water pollution

                  undoubtedly that water is the most precious resource that exists on our planet. It covers about 75% of the earth’s surface and with out it our planet will not grow and flourish. Even though most of us know these facts we just neglect that by contaminating our lakes, rivers and oceans. Consequently we are slowly damaging our planet by affecting the drinking water.

                 Water pollution is an undesirable change in the state of water, contaminated with harmful substances. Any change in the physical, chemical and biological properties of water that has a harmful effect on living things is water pollution.

There are two types of water pollution. Firstly surface waters these are the natural water resources of the Earth. These are found on the exterior of the Earth's crust, oceans, rivers and lakes. Secondly groundwater Water stored underground when weed killers used in people's gardens drain into the ground in aquifers.

                   Water is necessary to life on earth. All organisms contain it, some drink it, and some live in it. Plants and animals require water that is moderately pure, and they cannot survive if their water is loaded with toxic chemicals or harmful.  There are two ways to know if water is polluted. Firstly take samples of the water and measure the concentrations of different chemicals that it contains. If the chemicals are dangerous or the concentrations are too great, we can regard the water as polluted. Measurements like this are known as chemical indicators of water quality. Secondly examining the fish, insects, and other invertebrates that the water will support. If many different types of creatures can live in a river, the quality is likely to be very good; if the river supports no fish life at all, the quality is obviously much poorer. Measurements like this are called biological indicators of water quality.

                  Municipal, industrial and agricultural are the different categories of the causes of water pollution. Municipal causes are related to waste water from homes and commercial establishments. Sewage, sludge, garbage, and even toxic pollutants are all dumped into the water. No efforts are made to disinfect the sewage or to remove especially harmful pollutants. . Rivers, streams, canals, lakes, and oceans are currently used as receptacles for every imaginable kind of pollution. Lakes are especially polluted because they cannot cleanse themselves as rapidly as rivers or oceans. The second highest cause of water pollution is ship waste. Ships used to take much garbage with them on their ships and dump them.
The other main cause of water pollution is industrial waste. Industries do not be harmed by water pollution but the cause much it. Many companies pour chemicals into the waterways. Some of the businesses that contribute to the water pollution are businesses that repair and maintain motor vehicles, electroplate, and operate printing and coping equipment. Other cause is plastics. The
reason for that is that plastics take four hundred and fifty years to decompose in the water. Also many companies use plastic and people throw it in the waterways. It can cause harm to unsuspecting creatures hundreds of feet from where it was originally dumped. Such waste includes bags, bottles, cups, straws, cup lids, utensils and floats. Farmers often use chemicals to hinder bug infestations or other diseases from damaging or ruining their crops.  They may also use chemicals to enhance the growth of their crops.  Either way, these chemicals seep into the ground water or run off into lakes, creeks, or rivers, causing water pollution. 

                 The effects of water pollution are varied and depend on what chemicals are dumped and in what locations. The main problem caused by water pollution is that it kills life that inhabits water-based ecosystems.  Dead fish, birds, dolphins, and many other animals often wind up on beaches, killed by pollutants in their habitat. The food chain continues to be disrupted at all higher levels when toxins are in the water, the toxins travel from the water the animals drink to humans when the animals’ meat is eaten. Then when water is loaded with toxic chemicals or harmful microorganisms can in some cases killing all members of a species in an affected area. Also Pollutants in the water will alter the overall chemistry of the water, causing changes in acidity, temperature and conductivity.  These factors all have an affect on the marine life as we said.
 Eventually, humans are affected by this process as well.  People can get Infectious diseases such as typhoid and cholera can be contracted from drinking contaminated water.  This is called microbial water pollution.  The human heart and kidneys can be adversely affected if polluted water is consumed regularly.  Other health problems associated with polluted water are poor blood circulation, skin lesions, vomiting, and damage to the nervous system.  In fact, the effects of water pollution are said to be the leading cause of death for humans across the globe.

                     We need to start cleaning up the water or we will be in big trouble. The government needs to get active and so does the public. In some places water pollution is a main concern. The last defense of water pollution is water treatment. There are two main reasons for water treatment. The first one is to protect the public's health. The second one is to protect the water quality. Most of the waste water comes from industries, homes, businesses, storm runoff, ground water, and schools. Also sludge is being treated to remove some of its water. Then it is further processed by stabilizing, dewatering, and disposal.
Many laws have been created to restrict industries from dumping materials into the water. Many non-governmental projects are also being carried out in an effort to clean up the water.  Industries are beginning to reduce the amount of chemicals they dump into water, and environmental groups are participating in cleanup projects. The environmental police have taken charge of enforcing water pollution solutions. They have targeted everyone from delivery vehicles to the largest and wealthiest companies in the city. Also we should encourage Organic foods mean that there were no harmful contaminants used in the growing of the food.
                        Water is a necessity of life and it needs to be conserved and protected. From all of the above pollutants, our water supply is in dangerous. If we value life as we know it, we need to change our way of life and look at water in a different way. Water is a part of nature and nature encompasses everything. Not only the humans but all living organisms belong to and rely on nature. Let us encourage people to save water as well as to try keeping it clean and pure.