Friday, November 5, 2010

Final Draft




                               Essay on television
             Television is considered one of the most popular inventions of the twentieth century. Television becomes a changeable tool of personal life. It is a widely used and highly accepted device that is found in most homes today. Now we can't imagine our life without television. There is a great variety of opinions about television: some say that it’s very useful, and the others say that it’s harmful.
                      On the one hand there are various and valuable programs on television .Through it, we are provided with different kinds of information. There is news which informs us with every thing that happens around all over the world. Then it can be a means of adversiting, it provides us with information about new products. Besides information about weather broadcast. Also we can see the important events life especially sports events such as football matches. Moreover there are the educational programs; through it people absorb knowledge like science, history and health care.
                         On the other hand, Television is also kind of relaxation. For instances, people can see films or movies that can entertain them in their leisure time. Moreover watching TV is kind of activity for people who can't move much from their home.If you feel boring ,you can switch on TV and watch whatever you want like as comedy ,drama or action. TV programs can provide entertainment for individuals and groups.

                         Apart from its advantages, however, television  brings lots of disadvantages to viewers too. For me one of these disadvantages is that the television viewers become passive in their action. The TV separates us from the real world because it isn’t giving them opportunity to communicate with each other or the outer world.Also it wastes the time because people spend all their time watching TV.As result of that, they neglect their jobs.Besides to it reduces the connection among the members of family
                         Nowadays television becomes a means of harm especially for children. Many children become inactive in their educational life. That is because they spend most of their time watching TV and neglect their lessons and their homework. Also it has mental and physical effects on children. They face problems with their bodies such as overweight and effects on the eye- sight. Moreover it, there are a lot of programs or movies which aren’t suitable for children. Through it, children learn violence and may try it. So I'm against TV.
             In conclusion television is a great invention. But as we know every invention has its advantages and its disadvantages. So we should make use of it and make restriction on watching it.

1 comment:

  1. Hello, loah your essay is very good and your topic has useful ideas as many educationalists are speaking about the dangers of television .The essay has a clear purpose and a concise main idea. You have sense of organization to the essay .I liked your simple and Easy diction. Your punctuation is correct. But Lolo there are some spelling errors that you didn't notice them like:
    *we can provided with different kinds of information(can be provided)
    *every thing that happen(happens) around all over the world.
    *it provided(provides) us with information about new products .
    *children learn violence and may be try(may try) it.
    *So I against (am against)TV. But your essay ,as a whole, is coherent and very good.
    i am waiting for your excellent topics.

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