Second draft

            (Essay on Educational System)

            Education is very important for individuals. It is important for development of human and societies. Egypt has one of the largest education systems in the world. The Egyptian educational system is highly valued .It is divided into three stages, basic, primary stage, secondary stage and post secondary stage. Each stage has its features but Egypt also faces a lot of problems.

               First of all, there is the primary school where children receive the first stage of basic education. It depends on the student's ability. Then ,there is secondary school which is the final stage for compulsory education. Both of them are free and compulsory. The purpose of secondary education can be to give students general knowledge , to prepare them for vocational education or higher education.Also to train students directly to profession.finally university stage such as Cairo university,Ain shams university,Alexandria university and Suez canal university.

            There are two types of education as public education and private education.public education is under the government administration.It provides the governmental national curriculum.

The private education is similar to the governmental education but in it ,they pay attention on the students needs and the facilities which face them.They are considered to be better than public education but its fees are much higher.Moreover the public education is overcrowded with students unlike private education which has much smaller number of students.

             Unfortunately,there are a lot of problems which have effects on the educational system. The teachers don’t give students practical skills .They leave students without preparation for collage and then work places. Besides the lack of good libraries and the overcrowdedness of schools. Moreover facilities like science labs or computers are often closed.Also the system itself interested in memorizing and books rather than critical thinking.There are also proplems which related with the selection of teacher ,construction of building and the management of schools.

            Improving the educational system is the most important factor that needs immediate attention. To develop the education system, we need to train the teachers and make teaching an attractive profession. Also the government should improve the quality of learning and teaching. we need to make schools accessible to families everywhere. Make schooling attractive for children to like it. Then government should increase private income for the family, which provides a better life quality. Moreover government should recognize the weakness of educational system and reform it.    

         Education is necessary for the protection of individuals and socitities.It has been considered as a human right.So  government should have attention for problems of educational system and try to solve it.

first draft

            (Essay on Educational System)

            Education is very important for individuals. It is important for development of human and societies. Egypt has one of the largest education systems in the world. The Egyptian educational system is highly valued .It is divided into three stages, basic, primary stage, secondary stage and post secondary stage. Each stage has its features but Egypt also face a lot of problems.

               First of all, there is the primary school where children receive the first stage of basic education. It depends on the student's ability. Then ,there is secondary school which is the final stage for compulsory education. Both of them are free and compulsory. The purpose of secondary education can be to give students general knowledge , to prepare them for vocational education or higher education.Also to train students directly to profession.finally university stage such as Cairo university,Ain shams university,Alexandria university and Suez canal university.

            There are two types of education as public education and private education.public education is under the government administration.It provides the governmental national curriculum.

The private education is similar to the governmental education but in it ,they pay attention on the students needs and the facilities which face them.They are considered to be better than public education but its fees are much higher.Moreover the public education is overcrowded with students unlike private education which has much smaller number of students.

             Unfortunately,there are a lot of problems which have effects on the educational system. The teachers don’t give students practical skills .They leave students without preparation for collage and then work places. Besides the lack of good libraries and the overcrowdedness of schools. Moreover facilities like science labs or computers are often closed.Also the system itself interested in memorizing and books rather than critical thinking.There are also proplems which related with the selection of teacher ,construction of building and the management of schools.

            Improving the educational system is the most important factor that needs immediate attention. To develop the education system, we need to train the teachers and make teaching an attractive profession. Also the government should improve the quality of learning and teaching. we need to make schools accessible to families everywhere. Make schooling attractive for children to like it. Then government should increase private income for the family, which provides a better life quality. Moreover government should recognize the weakness of educational system and reform it.    

         Education is necessary for the protection of individuals and socitities.It has been considered as a human right.So  government should have attention for problems of educational system and try to solve it.

out line (Educational System)

Our Educational System

1-what is the importance of education?

2-what are the stages of education system in Egypt?

a.primary or basic stage.

b.secondary stage.

c.university stage 

-what are the types of education in Egypt? 3

a.public education.

b.private education.

4-what are the problems and facilities which face the education system in Egypt?

5-How can we solve the problems of educational system?

Final Draft

                               Essay on television

             Television is considered one of the most popular inventions of the twentieth century. Television becomes a changeable tool of personal life. It is a widely used and highly accepted device that is found in most homes today. Now we can't imagine our life without television. There is a great variety of opinions about television: some say that it’s very useful, and the others say that it’s harmful.

                      On the one hand there are various and valuable programs on television .Through it, we are provided with different kinds of information. There is news which informs us with every thing that happens around all over the world. Then it can be a means of adversiting, it provides us with information about new products. Besides information about weather broadcast. Also we can see the important events life especially sports events such as football matches. Moreover there are the educational programs; through it people absorb knowledge like science, history and health care.

                         On the other hand, Television is also kind of relaxation. For instances, people can see films or movies that can entertain them in their leisure time. Moreover watching TV is kind of activity for people who can't move much from their home.If you feel boring ,you can switch on TV and watch whatever you want like as comedy ,drama or action. TV programs can provide entertainment for individuals and groups.

                         Apart from its advantages, however, television  brings lots of disadvantages to viewers too. For me one of these disadvantages is that the television viewers become passive in their action. The TV separates us from the real world because it isn’t giving them opportunity to communicate with each other or the outer world.Also it wastes the time because people spend all their time watching TV.As result of that, they neglect their jobs.Besides to it reduces the connection among the members of family

                         Nowadays television becomes a means of harm especially for children. Many children become inactive in their educational life. That is because they spend most of their time watching TV and neglect their lessons and their homework. Also it has mental and physical effects on children. They face problems with their bodies such as overweight and effects on the eye- sight. Moreover it, there are a lot of programs or movies which aren’t suitable for children. Through it, children learn violence and may try it. So I'm against TV.

             In conclusion television is a great invention. But as we know every invention has its advantages and its disadvantages. So we should make use of it and make restriction on watching it.

Second draft

                               Essay on television

             Television is considered one of the most popular inventions of the twentieth century. Television becomes a changeable tool of person life. It is a widely used and highly accepted device that is found in most homes today. Now we can't imagine our life without television. There is a great variety of opinions about television: some say that it’s very useful, and the others that it’s harmful.

                      On one hand there are various and valuable programs on television .Through it, we can inform with different kinds of information. There is news which informs us with every thing happen around all over the world. Then it can be a mean of adversiting, it provided us with information about new products. Besides information about weather broadcast. Also we can sea the important events life especially sports events such as football matches. Moreover there are the educational programs; through it people absorb knowledge like science, history and health care.

                         On the other hand, Television is also kind of relaxation. For instances, people can sea films or movies that can entertain them in their leisure time. Moreover watching TV is kind of activity for people who can't moving much from their home. If you are bored, you can switch on TV and sea whatever you want like comedy, drama or action. Television programming can provide entertainment for individuals and groups.

                         Apart from its advantages, however, television also brings lots of disadvantages to viewers too. For me one of these disadvantages is that the television viewers become passive in their action. The TV separates us from the real world because it isn’t giving them opportunity to communicate with each other or the outer world.Also it wastes the time because people spend all their time watching TV.As result of that, they neglect their jobs.Besides to it reduces the connection among the members of family

                         Nowadays television becomes a means of harmful especially for children. Many children become inactive in their educational life. That is because they spend most of their time watching TV and neglect their lessons and their homework. Also it has mental and physical effects on children. They face problems with their bodies such as overweight and effects on the eye- sight. Moreover it, there are a lot of programs or movies which aren’t suitable for children. Through it, children learn violence and may be try it. So I against TV.

             In conclusion television is a great invention. But as we know every invention has its advantages and its disadvantages. So we should make use of it and make restriction on watching it.